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Thursday, July 24, 2008

Impress and Express

We just finished the first half of the Business Writing Workshop by Brainworks Asia. It's funny how some common phrases that we already perceived as canon grammar are actually technically incorrect. Phrases like "fill up" should be "fill out" and a "free gift" is obviously just a "gift" as an "ATM machine" is redundant since it already means Automated Teller MACHINE. But we often see and might have used them ourselves regularly.

I've written articles and literatures for publications and I've been into creative writing for God-knows how long already. With it, I'm the type who writes more to impress in addition to just express something. Formal writing for me is like a censorship. It restricts freedom in composition and artistry in wordplay.

As such, I don't feel any comfortable writing in a business tone just as how I feel fidgety and absurd wearing long-sleeve polo shirts at work.

This workshop has a lot to teach me; if not as much as to my grammatical usage but in inculcating in my mind that in a business environment, a concisely structured statement will win a Carlos Palanca Award over a creative fiction.

Funky.

3 Comments:

Blogger Niel said...

kanina sa meeting, naalala ko lang sabi ng isa bakit "TIN No" e number na nga yung N sa TIN...

sa isip ko "e sa marami namang number yun eh"

pero hindi ako yung gumawa nun ha.

tapos may isa sa presentation nya nakasulat "payed". napahiya tuloy.

nakikihalo lang.

7/24/2008 5:48 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

obi:

if you're serious about creative writing (or any writing at all), i suggest you pick up ELEMENTS OF STYLE. it's a classic grammar & composition book that's been in use since the time of the great flood. hehe.

in almost all forms of writing (and any craft, really), less is more. simplify simplify simplify. write in heat, edit in cold blood.

this ensures that you get your message across, while not spoonfeeding the target audience. no matter how much you spoonfeed, the idiots and retards will never understand, while the smart ones will get turned away.

an overwhelming amount of popular entertainment gets fucked simply because the maker(s) don't know subtlety and "JUST ENOUGH".

-garrboi

7/28/2008 7:01 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

pota!

ELEMENTS OF STYLE ftwroxxorz! tagal na neto ah. hahaha. naalala ko bigla yung Composition teacher ko hahaha.

demmit. you just carbon dated yourself again. hehehe.

but i likes this...

"no matter how much you spoonfeed, the idiots and retards will never understand, while the smart ones will get turned away."

haha.

7/29/2008 12:01 PM  

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Merong na nakatambay.

Thursday, July 24, 2008

Impress and Express

We just finished the first half of the Business Writing Workshop by Brainworks Asia. It's funny how some common phrases that we already perceived as canon grammar are actually technically incorrect. Phrases like "fill up" should be "fill out" and a "free gift" is obviously just a "gift" as an "ATM machine" is redundant since it already means Automated Teller MACHINE. But we often see and might have used them ourselves regularly.

I've written articles and literatures for publications and I've been into creative writing for God-knows how long already. With it, I'm the type who writes more to impress in addition to just express something. Formal writing for me is like a censorship. It restricts freedom in composition and artistry in wordplay.

As such, I don't feel any comfortable writing in a business tone just as how I feel fidgety and absurd wearing long-sleeve polo shirts at work.

This workshop has a lot to teach me; if not as much as to my grammatical usage but in inculcating in my mind that in a business environment, a concisely structured statement will win a Carlos Palanca Award over a creative fiction.

Funky.

3 Comments:

Blogger Niel said...

kanina sa meeting, naalala ko lang sabi ng isa bakit "TIN No" e number na nga yung N sa TIN...

sa isip ko "e sa marami namang number yun eh"

pero hindi ako yung gumawa nun ha.

tapos may isa sa presentation nya nakasulat "payed". napahiya tuloy.

nakikihalo lang.

7/24/2008 5:48 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

obi:

if you're serious about creative writing (or any writing at all), i suggest you pick up ELEMENTS OF STYLE. it's a classic grammar & composition book that's been in use since the time of the great flood. hehe.

in almost all forms of writing (and any craft, really), less is more. simplify simplify simplify. write in heat, edit in cold blood.

this ensures that you get your message across, while not spoonfeeding the target audience. no matter how much you spoonfeed, the idiots and retards will never understand, while the smart ones will get turned away.

an overwhelming amount of popular entertainment gets fucked simply because the maker(s) don't know subtlety and "JUST ENOUGH".

-garrboi

7/28/2008 7:01 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

pota!

ELEMENTS OF STYLE ftwroxxorz! tagal na neto ah. hahaha. naalala ko bigla yung Composition teacher ko hahaha.

demmit. you just carbon dated yourself again. hehehe.

but i likes this...

"no matter how much you spoonfeed, the idiots and retards will never understand, while the smart ones will get turned away."

haha.

7/29/2008 12:01 PM  

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